Milo Feebe - Revision history

Bob at 01:44, 5 April 2010

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 Milo's cat form is that of a normal feline with fiery yellow/orangish fur. Close inspection of his fur reveals that each hair gradually changes its pigment, between the various pigments of fire, giving it a very slight similarity to the look of a flickering fire, but from a normal distance Milo looks like any other orange and yellow cat. The only notable item about his appearance is a small patch of fur missing around his front left ankle. The skin in this area appears to have been burned off long ago, and Milo's fur mostly covers it. His eyes are yellow and are that of a normal cat, but seem aged.
 ===The Mark===
-The patch of fur missing from Milo's front left ankle is a mark of Demüen. In his hobbit form the skin around his left middle finger is singed from the ring permanently attaching itself. The mark in his cat form is the equivalent.
+The patch of fur missing from Milo's front left ankle is a mark of Demüen. In his hobbit form the skin around his left middle finger is singed from the ring permanently attaching itself. The mark on his ankle in his cat form is the only link he has to his former self.
 ==History==
 ===Origins===

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-[[Category:People]]
 ==Summary==
-Milo Feebe was a simple [[hobbit]] child who, through an unfortunate meeting with [[Geris'l]], was turned into a mass murderering cat.
+Milo Feebe was a simple [[hobbit]] child who, through an unfortunate meeting with [[Geris'l]], was turned into a mass murdering cat.
 ==Appearance==
 Milo's cat form is that of a normal feline with fiery yellow/orangish fur. Close inspection of his fur reveals that each hair gradually changes its pigment, between the various pigments of fire, giving it a very slight similarity to the look of a flickering fire, but from a normal distance Milo looks like any other orange and yellow cat. The only notable item about his appearance is a small patch of fur missing around his front left ankle. The skin in this area appears to have been burned off long ago, and Milo's fur mostly covers it. His eyes are yellow and are that of a normal cat, but seem aged.
+===The Mark===
 ==History==
 ===Origins===
 ===Family===
 Milo has two siblings, his brother, [[Lorian Feebe]] (deceased), was one year younger then Milo. His sister [[Krin Feebe]], is three years older. To the best of Milo's knowledge [[Krin Feebe | Krin]] still alive

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	==History==		==History==
		+	===Origins===
		+	===Family===
	Milo has two siblings, his brother, [[Lorian Feebe]] (deceased), was one year younger then Milo. His sister [[Krin Feebe]], is three years older. To the best of Milo's knowledge [[Krin Feebe \| Krin]] still alive		Milo has two siblings, his brother, [[Lorian Feebe]] (deceased), was one year younger then Milo. His sister [[Krin Feebe]], is three years older. To the best of Milo's knowledge [[Krin Feebe \| Krin]] still alive

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 | diety = [[Demüen]]
 | player = [[User:Bob| Bob]]
-| campaign = Worldshaper's Song
+| campaign = [[Worldshaper's Song]]
 }}

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 | diety = [[Demüen]]
 | player = [[User:Bob| Bob]]
 }}

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 | residence = formerly a hobbit village
 | gender = Male
 | age = unknown
 | level = 12

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 | class = Sorcerer
 | race = [[Hobbit]]
-| diety = [[Demáen]]
+| diety = [[Demüen]]
 | player = [[User:Bob| Bob]]
 }}

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 | gender = Male
 | age = 14
-| level = 14
+| level = 12
 | align = CG/LE
 | class = Sorcerer